Leif Andreason: Dude, that's a monster sentence. Let's shred it, shall we? Keeping all your basic thoughts, here are some options."Landscaping work appeals to me because of the combination of hard work and skill development it provides."Or"My goal is to develop my knowledge of the subject and my skill in applying it." Or "I enjoy working hard and learning new things. Landscaping provides the perfect opportunity for both."Shorter and cleaner is always better when it comes to this sort of writing. You're better off with two short sentences than one long one but one short one is better yet. Say a little more if you must but keep it tight. Everyone hates reading resumes, the wordier they are the more it makes them sneer, especially if they're going through a huge stack of them. Good luck on your job hunt!...Show more
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